LO3 Draft Review

This is a good draft because we have progressed noticeably since the last draft.The draft is looking a lot brighter, we have brightened up the footage where Will is in the grey hoodie and a snapback, and the footage in the building and the footage from the rooftop. This is good because the footage was a bit too dark previously. There is also the fact that we have new footage added to the draft, this included a new outfit and location. The title still needs adding to the start of the video, but this is still being worked on, and we want it too look good and stereotypical. 

LO4 Offline Edit

I think the cutting in the video is good and the lip-synching is done well.

I think we need to improve on how we film as some of the footage need editing to make it brighter of darker.

I think that adding effects such as blurs and black and white. We can also edit the footage by editing the colours and also use black and white effects to fit with the traditional genre of hip hop.